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This article originally appeared in the Videomaker Magazine June, 2001 issue. Pages 97 - 99
Reprinted with permission from Videomaker Magazine, Chico CA., Videomaker Inc. All Rights Reserved
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©2005 Videomaker Magazine. Reproduction of this article for any use other than personal is prohibited.

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A Ready to
Shoot Television
Commercial Parody

by

Tad Butts

Storyboard - Late for a date

Most of the time we think of commercials as annoying interruptions, but looked at from another perspective, they can be excellent lessons in storytelling technique.

You can tell a whole story with just a few shots if you plan them carefully. Think of this story as a television commercial. You have between 30 and 60 seconds to introduce your character, give him a goal, challenge him with obstacles and bring it all to a satisfying end. Sound challenging? It is, and that's the fun of it. The ending? We'll leave that up to you. We've provided a few options to get the creative juices flowing.

The Plot

A man is riding in an elevator when he is suddenly reminded what day it is. Panic-stricken, he embarks on a mad dash across town. Not about to let anything keep him from reaching his destination, he hurdles obstacles, jumping over a baby carriage. He crashes into a college student, knocking books and papers out of her hands. He makes a half-hearted attempt to help her with her books and then keeps running. Using his cell phone, he even arranges for flowers to be delivered to him en route. Finally, trading his phone for a skateboard, he careens wildly through a city park before wiping out at the foot of a flight of stairs. He is greeted by the delivery person, claims his flowers and races up the stairs to an impressive door. There he pauses for just a moment to recompose himself before stepping inside.

What happens next is up to your imagination. Maybe it's his rich old aunt's birthday and he is trying to stay on her good side in order to have a shot at the inheritance. Maybe he's meeting his wife for what he thinks is their anniversary only to have her point out to him that it's actually her birthday. Or maybe he's just raced across town in order to be there for his daughter's first violin recital. It's getting him there that's the fun part. Use our 15-shot storyboard or think of your own creative obstacles for your hero to overcome. When you're finished, send us a copy of your video. We'd love to see how things worked out.

 

Props

To make this video you'll need:

  • Bouquet of flowers
  • Cell phone
  • Skateboard
  • A dog with a leash
  • Four actors (and a few extras)

 


This article originally appeared in the Videomaker Magazine June, 2001 issue. Pages 97 - 99
Reprinted with permission from Videomaker Magazine, Chico CA., Videomaker Inc. All Rights Reserved
Call: (800) 284-3226 for subscription information
For this and other articles visit us at www.videomaker.com
©2005 Videomaker Magazine. Reproduction of this article for any use other than personal is prohibited.


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